Monday, 21 February 2011

Paul's 40th Take 2

I kept going back to look at Paul's card from yesterday and just couldn't put my finger on what was wrong.  Then I got a fab constructive comment from Abi saying that the background was too white.  That's exactly what was wrong with it so I took it all apart and printed off another stripey digi paper, again from Summer Driggs and now I like it a whole lot better.


What do you think?

8 comments:

susiestacey said...

I think..........it is lovely, the stripes look fab x Susan x

Vicky said...

This is gorgeous hun altho I did love it before I thought the white really helped make everything else pop out more.... Both are gorgeous tho hun.

Lotsa hugs Vicky xxx

Vicky said...

Debs this is fabulous hun ~ and I must say I love both the versions :o)

hugs Vicky xx

Paula said...

Actually I have to agree it is better, I can see now what was adrift, I honestly thought it was fine yesterday but now it zings with life & I can see why - I think the white would still work but you need the spacing of the second card with much more pattern showing, the mouse is actually better without the 4 on his nose! I didn't see that he was falling over backwards yesterday - much good I was giving my opinion; good job you stuck with your instinct. I much prefer today's embellishments too. Sorry not to have been much help yesterday, now this I really really like.
Paula (PEP)

Abi said...

Oh wow Debs, it's taken a great card & made it fabulous! I really like this so much better, great choice of paper. I'm really touched you took on board my comments.

Hugs x

Donna said...

Your card is fantastic! Was lovely the first time but must admit it looks even better now. Donna x

coops said...

fabulous male card debs.love the image and the papers are stunning :D

xx coops xx

xxxtglxxx said...

Perfick! :) The stripes have made such an amazing difference! :)

Im just like you, I often start over again when something just doesnt feel right, and I always feel happier for it. Good on ya! :) Both were cracking cards though x

Have a great weekend,

hugs

xxalisonxx